This evolved fairly easily from my first draft of it (always a nice surprise). I also found that chapter 10 of They Say/I Say was a little more fun than some of the others – I had to consider my argument in detail, and I think it led my paper in a different direction than I would have had otherwise. I feel that a strength of this paper is its clarity (I hope), in that it follows from one point to another easily. This was especially heartening due to the number of complex ideas involved in this week’s essay topic! With that said, I think I can improve most on the “Power” paragraphs. They currently seem wishy-washy to me, in that I didn’t feel I could pull out much textual support for them (I was trying to keep to the “one brief quote” rule for this paper).
Trevor 
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